Friday, February 29, 2008

Softly, Gently Comments

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As I look at me I can see
Softly, Gently I am dying
Little is left for me now
That has not yet been defaced with pain
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Clinton MacDonald
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Coach Roth 29 February 2008

Your phrasing creates the perfect mood to feel your images...and the echoing last lines remind me of Dylan 'rage, rage against the dying of the light' although obviously with the opposite sentiment...nicely done...Coach

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