Deep down the forest lay a hard piece of rough stone
It's surface as turbulent as rough weather
Haunted and hidden for many years
from the touch of sharp eagle eyes to the powerful rays of sun.
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So as the stone has lost its rough edges and the cuts and marks it bore, with the touch of loving currents, you have started to glow like a precious stone with the touch of LOVE.... great comparison! Enjoyed the poem, Geetha! Instead of 'unnoticed by none', make it 'noticed by none'!
: -) . very nicely expressed lovely thoughts. hard work and nice poem.
Away from all Untouched by love Unnoticed by none... nice lines..10 love can polish can give good finish can turn devil into gentleman.. love can do anything
Weathered stone symbolizing ages, smoothed by touch of stream symbolizing love. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
gud one............ touched my soul........... lovely