Sunday, December 29, 2013

Soft Touch Of Love! Comments

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Deep down the forest lay a hard piece of rough stone
It's surface as turbulent as rough weather
Haunted and hidden for many years
from the touch of sharp eagle eyes to the powerful rays of sun.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Nirvaan Babbar 30 January 2014

gud one............ touched my soul........... lovely

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Valsa George 28 January 2014

So as the stone has lost its rough edges and the cuts and marks it bore, with the touch of loving currents, you have started to glow like a precious stone with the touch of LOVE.... great comparison! Enjoyed the poem, Geetha! Instead of 'unnoticed by none', make it 'noticed by none'!

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Muhammad Ali 01 January 2014

: -) . very nicely expressed lovely thoughts. hard work and nice poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2014

Away from all Untouched by love Unnoticed by none... nice lines..10 love can polish can give good finish can turn devil into gentleman.. love can do anything

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 December 2013

Weathered stone symbolizing ages, smoothed by touch of stream symbolizing love. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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