Soft-Lit Love Comments

A lovely poem that only a woman could do, and you did it well Warm regards AJS

Adrienne, I appreciate you posting this when you did. My last poem(the German one) is a tribute to my first love, on her birthday. I do not know if I am the only one. But I will Never, ever, forget her. And my first love. H

I love it. Except for the words 'this evening'. Just a thought. (this night, the evening, ...) It is probably just me. But then again... H

Ooooh Adrienne! There is nothing quite like the electricity one feels from the first kisses which herald the dawn of a new love. Excellent poem. Kenneth