Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Soft Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

So soft and fragile is a woman's life
delicate like a rose's petals
that if trampled on, they die never to
come back to life.
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Saadat Tahir 30 June 2011

very tender and focused lines.... beautiful :) sat

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Ramesh Kavdia 30 June 2011

so graceful poem about the real woman.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 29 June 2011

It was a marvellous poem written with great skill. The poem is highly rich in imagery and style. I liked it very much. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Warmest regards Akmal

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