Thursday, September 19, 2013

Soft As The Wind Comments

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This day has been dragging,
My heart won't stop nagging,
Anxious for night to appear;
Now the moon's on my pillow,
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Lora Colon
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David Lessard 02 December 2013

Very moving. Another beautiful write.

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Joseph Narusiewicz 01 October 2013

may i be the moonlight?

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John Brown 29 September 2013

Nice poem Lora. I like, 'Now the moon's on my pillow'.

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

you come to me soft as the wind. a lovely observation.

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Savita Tyagi 25 September 2013

So happy to come across your poems. Memory of love is deeper than love itself. You create a sketch that is spell binding. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 22 September 2013

Another sweet poem! 'You come to me soft as the wind'! Even from this far, I can feel his coming! Lovely imageries! !

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Adeline Foster 21 September 2013

This is indeed a lovely poem and I like your rhyming scheme. Read mine – O Dearest Love – Adeline

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 20 September 2013

Now the moon's on my pillow, And that old weeping willow Smiles as the wind dries its tears your magic wand, Lora, of crafting imageries, is a ceaseless wonder!

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