Saturday, June 15, 2019

Soft Are My Feelings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't be fooled by my outer shell
soft are my feelings if you knew me well
Inside I crave to be loved and adored
instead I'm shunned and shown to the door
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C F 21 June 2019

A very tender appeal, a tender write... but no poetess should have to write such an emotion, women need to be wooed. Next time choose your crush wisely. A memorable write.10+

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Bri Edwards 19 June 2019

to MyPoemList, did i already say that? ?

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Bri Edwards 19 June 2019

hee-hee: line one typo! but don't be too hard on yourself due to it; even GREAT poets leave a typo from time to time. NOT me, Of Course! ! to MyPoemList bri :) Aqua F.... RIP Now she's " gone" and YOU can now know: Her feelings were too soft & I'll miss her so.

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Aqua Flower 21 June 2019

I can count on you for the good editing. And to your poemlist with a typo too? So much love...thank you.

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