Soft Are My Feelings Poem by Aqua Flower

Soft Are My Feelings

Rating: 5.0


Don't be fooled by my outer shell
soft are my feelings if you knew me well
Inside I crave to be loved and adored
instead I'm shunned and shown to the door
Love is kindness and respect
is that too much to ask for and expect
soft are my feelings I hide
outside I smile but inside I cry
don't be fooled by the face I paint on
you'll know the truth after I am gone

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Saturday, June 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,love,respect
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 21 June 2019

A very tender appeal, a tender write... but no poetess should have to write such an emotion, women need to be wooed. Next time choose your crush wisely. A memorable write.10+

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Bri Edwards 19 June 2019

to MyPoemList, did i already say that? ?

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Bri Edwards 19 June 2019

hee-hee: line one typo! but don't be too hard on yourself due to it; even GREAT poets leave a typo from time to time. NOT me, Of Course! ! to MyPoemList bri :) Aqua F.... RIP Now she's " gone" and YOU can now know: Her feelings were too soft & I'll miss her so.

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Aqua Flower 21 June 2019

I can count on you for the good editing. And to your poemlist with a typo too? So much love...thank you.

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