Soft And Sensual Mouth Comments

Hello Uriah Wonderfully written, this piece....thankyou be well... Love, D.

A great piece of writing. This is what poetry should do: universalise experience. And this works so well at that level. The flow of the piece is great and adds something to the pathos of the narration. A thouroughly well worked poem my friend.

The heart wants what the heart wants, class and breeding what are these things to her heart... Andrew 10

Love the opening storyline to this, gives it credibility. Lovely story and I couldn't agree more with the sentiments; once mouths have pressed together - what chance do we have? HG: -) xx