Wednesday, July 8, 2015

Sofia Comments

Rating: 4.7

A gift from above -
Pure love, just smiling and shining light
Where ever you go
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Lisa Langton
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Sandra Feldman 12 September 2015

Never a mother's love more beautifully expressed As deep as the ocean, with such sentiment, blessed. Extraordinary poem, one of the best ever read

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 August 2015

cara Lisa, è un vero peccato non aver ricevuto risposta.. in questo modo non posso includere le tue due 2 poesie nell'ebook '' WHISPERS TO THE WORLD - BISBIGLI AL MONDO ''.. Mi dispiace davvero... Spero di sentirti presto.. e che tu possa far parte di una prossima Antologia dear Lisa, it's a real pity I haven't received any news from you.. this way I cannot include your 2 poems in the Anthology ebook ''WHISPERS TO THE WORLD''.. I'm really sorry... : (( hope to hear from you soon.. so that you can be part of an upcoming anthology

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 July 2015

cara Lisa ti ho appena inviato la traduzione di entrambe le poesie... Ciao Fabrizio

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Daniel Brick 13 July 2015

I AM YOUR MOTHER AND THANK YOU FOR CHOOSING ME. Wow! That is as beautiful a sentiment that a parent can express. What generosity of spirit you display in thanking your daughter for choosing you as her parent. Whether that notion is literally true or not, doesn't matter to me because it has poetic truth and it is expressed with simple sincerity. I suspect this poem expresses a love for Sophia which is only the tip of the proverbial iceberg of love beneath the surface. Sophia is blessed, you are blessed, the family you embody is blessed. Your poem celebrates life as it should be lived! !

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 July 2015

truly right, Daniel!

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Chinedu Dike 11 July 2015

A beautiful poem by a doting mum that captures the unadulterated love for a child, felt in inner recesses of the heart. A well articulated piece of poetry, subtly penned with conviction. A lovely one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 July 2015

Very nice.Flow is smooth and concept is beautiful.

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Fabrizio Frosini 08 July 2015

after a love-song for Africa, a song of love for your child.. both beautifully penned, Lisa..

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Ann Mac 08 July 2015

I like your poem. Keep writing :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 July 2015

Pure love! ! With the mus eof the joy of the heart. Nice work.

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Captive and mellifluously structured from onset to close-out...Your employment of pictorial imagescape in particular, Stanza 5, glaced this fine slice of free-verse with poetic resplendence ~FjR~

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