Thursday, December 13, 2018

Sods Law Comments

Rating: 5.0

There you lay
Minute by minute, hour every hour
Clock watching
Fighting with your mind to allow dreams
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Jennifer Birchall
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Julia Luber 16 February 2019

This is a good poem about being overstimulated and all the habits one has to go through despite being consumed by one's mind.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2018

To toss and turn! ! Thoughts of love and life. Thanks for sharing.

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Matthew Holloway 13 December 2018

another excellent poem jenny, so well written

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Jennifer Birchall 13 December 2018

Thank you Matthew and I really appreciate that you read my work.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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