Monday, September 20, 2010

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Make me, O socks, thy spinning wheel complete.
Thy cotton fabric softly embrace my toes.
Colorful patterns engulf eager feet.
Our intimate desires, only we shall know.
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Rebecca Paul
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Bri Edwards 06 July 2013

cool! thanks for adding the note explaining the title. i'm not familiar with that poem. the mention of spinning wheel i did not understand, but all in all i found this to be another great poem. well, almost great. i do believe i found a few errors: My death would imminent t'were I sold you. ....other than not knowing about t'were...there should be BE in front of imminent (an adjective) AND: make the THYs THEEs, and make THEE THY in the following 3 lines: Thy held sure and strong. Thy stood with me in every bitter-sweet moment. May thee threads hold together long. maybe you wrote this when you were sleepy? ? thanks for sharing! may your socks always be with you, though bare feet can feel pretty good at times and you might want to take the socks aka sox off in the shower.

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