Sunday, December 16, 2012

Society (Thought / Sad) Comments

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How can I smile, and speak as tho I am free,
When society raps its chains around me?
The struggle and the strain...
Are sadly all in vane,
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Poet of the River
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Kevin Patrick 24 December 2012

Very interesting it seems that the beginning is focused on alienation and a disconnection from the social order but the more I read this I can't help but feel this is more an internal struggle with your Identity. It’s not society its your struggle to be part of it. The last lines really say it all trust is a short change commodity

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