Monday, March 12, 2012

Socialist Jesus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Revolution is dead,
buried next door to God
I Got his son's autograph,
at the souvenir shop
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Ruby Honeytip 13 December 2012

Holy Jeebus Kevin! ! ! This is a behemoth piece of poetry! Awe inspiring in it's perfection of flow and content. Could be lyrics to a heavy metal song....

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Dave Walker 22 March 2012

Wow, amazing, love the last stanza, a truly fantastic poem.

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Eric Cockrell 20 March 2012

what a poem! an absolute work! and you nailed your subject... makes me want to go out and start over!

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Martin O'Neill 20 March 2012

Makes me think of the tee-shirt I saw recently - Che Guavera, selling tee-shirts to rich kids for decades! I like where you are coming from on this, and it contains some killer lines.

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Kevin Patrick

Kevin Patrick

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