Friday, May 1, 2015

Social Comment - Who Will Stand For The Children? Comments

Rating: 4.3

In judgement’s call a parchment list revealed
Of deeds indefensible and innocence congealed
A baby left all alone in an oppressive heat
The mother’s denial was for herself to secrete
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Khalida Bano Ali 25 June 2018

A touching sad story of children left alone, why such persons give birth to children?

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Jasbir Chatterjee 04 April 2016

Very touching poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 January 2016

A 12 year old daughter too scared to be alone With a step-father to force his desire so prone sad such things happen but then guys write books and earn teach those baaaass to use condoms if they enter small kids at random sad their minds are at tandem as women want them in theirs often

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Lyn Paul 02 May 2015

So fortunate you found this baby. Laws have finally awoken to child abuse and violence to women. I hope there will be an end.

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Jaishree Nair 01 May 2015

A nice poem ;sad to say that just about describes this era.values are fast disappearing from the face of the earth.Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 01 May 2015

A tale of domestic violence, child abuse and neglect well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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