My heart sobs
Harping on the past
A lost moon
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Ever so beautifully and powerfully expressed on the heartache of love! .. Ever so heart touching! .. Beyond #'s! ...+++++
I feel elated that the poem communicates to you. Thank you, Becca. Thank you.
Make some time for play, and hug your child today!
Thank you, Linda for this advice. But my daughter is working and lives an another city. 😊
The rhyme in the comment makes it better poetry than my three-lined nothing
The Moon is such a symbol of lost love. Your poem captures the sad feeling, so werll
You have captured my sense of loss accurately, Sandra
Thank you, Ms Mohapatra, for visiting the poem and favouring me with your thoughts. I note that you regularly visit my poems and record your comments. I am moved, dear poet. Obliged.
Thank you Geeta, for your love, affection and concern. Hope, I'd soon overcome the mood. Once again, Thank you.
Dear Unnikrishnan, Like Poetess Susan, i would not like to see you in a sad state.
Thank you Geeta. Gloom the basic factual entity in human life. Better, we learn to live with it
my friend, I hate to see you in the grip of sorrow--yet without sorrow how could we feel the intensity of bliss--and the capacity to feel both is essential to a poet of your caliber---so I just send you my loving concern and enjoy your poetic pen--5 stars and faving this, my good friend
I am overwhelmed by the words of your affection, your concern. Words fail.
I had posted a thank you note the day posted this message to me. Somehow, it has disappeared. I just wanted to say Hello to you and express my gratitude to you for the concern. I felt so relieved and relaxed after reading your message.
A short, sad and calm song of the lonely heart, thank you!
As darkness is the ultimate reality of the cosmic infinity, gloom is the infinite reality of man's life. Seldom, very rarely a glimmer escapes the Styx