Saturday, January 15, 2022

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My heart sobs
Harping on the past
A lost moon
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Alyx Thru Edge 06 July 2024

A short, sad and calm song of the lonely heart, thank you!

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As darkness is the ultimate reality of the cosmic infinity, gloom is the infinite reality of man's life. Seldom, very rarely a glimmer escapes the Styx

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Rebecca Navarre 01 March 2022

Ever so beautifully and powerfully expressed on the heartache of love! .. Ever so heart touching! .. Beyond #'s! ...+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

I feel elated that the poem communicates to you. Thank you, Becca. Thank you.

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 16 January 2022

Make some time for play, and hug your child today!

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 January 2022

Thank you, Linda for this advice. But my daughter is working and lives an another city. 😊

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 16 January 2022

Harp not on the past -- it simply did not last.

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 January 2022

Wonderful observation, dear Poet.

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The rhyme in the comment makes it better poetry than my three-lined nothing

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Sandra Feldman 16 January 2022

The Moon is such a symbol of lost love. Your poem captures the sad feeling, so werll

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 January 2022

Thank you, Sandra. Obliged.

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You have captured my sense of loss accurately, Sandra

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Ruta Mohapatra 16 January 2022

Sad and touching! The past does rise up time to time!

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 January 2022

Thank you, Ms Mohapatra, for visiting the poem and favouring me with your thoughts. I note that you regularly visit my poems and record your comments. I am moved, dear poet. Obliged.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 January 2022

The poem is a Poetic marvel........10

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 January 2022

Thank you Geeta, for your love, affection and concern. Hope, I'd soon overcome the mood. Once again, Thank you.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 January 2022

Dear Unnikrishnan, Like Poetess Susan, i would not like to see you in a sad state.

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Thank you Geeta. Gloom the basic factual entity in human life. Better, we learn to live with it

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Susan Williams 15 January 2022

my friend, I hate to see you in the grip of sorrow--yet without sorrow how could we feel the intensity of bliss--and the capacity to feel both is essential to a poet of your caliber---so I just send you my loving concern and enjoy your poetic pen--5 stars and faving this, my good friend

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 January 2022

I am overwhelmed by the words of your affection, your concern. Words fail.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

I had posted a thank you note the day posted this message to me. Somehow, it has disappeared. I just wanted to say Hello to you and express my gratitude to you for the concern. I felt so relieved and relaxed after reading your message.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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