Sobs Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Sobs

Rating: 5.0


My heart sobs
Harping on the past
A lost moon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alyx Thru Edge 06 July 2024

A short, sad and calm song of the lonely heart, thank you!

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As darkness is the ultimate reality of the cosmic infinity, gloom is the infinite reality of man's life. Seldom, very rarely a glimmer escapes the Styx

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Rebecca Navarre 01 March 2022

Ever so beautifully and powerfully expressed on the heartache of love! .. Ever so heart touching! .. Beyond #'s! ...+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

I feel elated that the poem communicates to you. Thank you, Becca. Thank you.

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 16 January 2022

Make some time for play, and hug your child today!

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 January 2022

Thank you, Linda for this advice. But my daughter is working and lives an another city. 😊

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 16 January 2022

Harp not on the past -- it simply did not last.

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The rhyme in the comment makes it better poetry than my three-lined nothing

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 January 2022

Wonderful observation, dear Poet.

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Sandra Feldman 16 January 2022

The Moon is such a symbol of lost love. Your poem captures the sad feeling, so werll

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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