Sobriety Comments

sobriety the power to reveal the inner beauty but long lasting effect is the pretty....... every couple of lines is quotable...... very philosophical...images are high in quality....rhymes ate smooth and sweet sounding.... thanks.

Hi Saraswathy, A beautiful poem revealing the importance of maintaining sobriety in one's life, expressed in matching imagery from nature, the bower with fragrance of life the nature offers. strings of lute stand alone, quiver to give the same music to clone.... love is the ocean of depth to find and bind but souls are on the shores of sands.... pillars of temple stands apart to fathom but shower to give the divinity of sanctum Loved reading the poem. Congrats for penning this one. Thank you for sharing.10++

To reveal the inner beauty! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing.