Wednesday, October 13, 2021

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Rating: 5.0

I'm just a grain of sand
only visible in the palm of your hand
I am dust in the far land
the air of life in so many blends
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

part1 The poetic degree of this text is very high, its imagery are innovative and new, and its connotations are beautiful and important,

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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

part2 yes with humility we go up to the top, excellent dear poet sharing this gem with us and thanks

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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

I'm just a grain of sand only visible in the palm of your hand

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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

but no tools can break me in the foreign land of sovereignty

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Freeyad Ibrahim 13 October 2021

Accurate Translation

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Freeyad Ibrahim 27 October 2022

sorry--I heb net gezien---any way it is great..a grain of sand is solid...unbreakable- 5 stars top score

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Gabriel Oluwalana 13 October 2021

5stars for this beautiful poem. I love.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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