Monday, May 1, 2006

Soap By The Washbowl Comments

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Small piece of white, marbled soap,
Sitting neatly beneath the china bowl.
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Teedy Dawn
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Brian Dorn 01 May 2006

Teedy, nice expression of value and meaning... very well done! ! Brian

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R H 01 May 2006

A visual piece with lovely use of alliteration. Kind regards, Justine

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Goldy Locks 01 May 2006

very rhythmic/lyrical. enjoyed, good read. i would've liked you to delve deeper into the ancestry&water that connection. sus

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Teedy Dawn

Teedy Dawn

Sheffield, Yorkshire, England
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