Thanks to Ivan Donn Carswell for all his help and corrections. He's an amazing poet, happens to be posted on this site; look him up.
The music stretched out its notes;
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You have a brilliant imagination, and it certainly shows in this poem. very good!
We're were so mutable, our tingling hands almost becoming a pebble, or each other awesome
I'm spinning with awe, seeing an Ingénue rising into the firmament! Except Delilah is not naive and there is a lot more to come... Rgds, Ivan