Tuesday, August 19, 2008

Soaking In Algae, Burning With 'sunset Orange' Comments

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Thanks to Ivan Donn Carswell for all his help and corrections. He's an amazing poet, happens to be posted on this site; look him up.


The music stretched out its notes;
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Delilah Miller
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Ivan Donn Carswell 20 August 2008

I'm spinning with awe, seeing an Ingénue rising into the firmament! Except Delilah is not naive and there is a lot more to come... Rgds, Ivan

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Adam Holmes 19 August 2008

You have a brilliant imagination, and it certainly shows in this poem. very good!

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We're were so mutable, our tingling hands almost becoming a pebble, or each other awesome

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Delilah Miller

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