Tuesday, January 24, 2017

Soaked Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

I soaked sand
I wrote your name
The opening and wavy
A bold, body wave
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Shakira Nandini
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Binayakumar Mohanty 02 November 2017

Stress comes and goes with wave.But tide marks of memory creates nice lines of poems like soaked sand.Thanks for sharing.A huge 10

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Saadat Tahir 01 February 2017

few nice short lines...make us remember that time.... nice liked

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