Wednesday, September 11, 2019

So You Think Comments

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So, you think, you can
Swim through the cold, deep ocean
Depending on a lonesome straw
Which lost the fire of its soul
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Aamir Abdullah
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A B Faniki 05 October 2019

A lovely piece with beautiful imagery and lovely words flow. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 September 2019

So, you think, you can Swim through the cold, deep ocean Depending on a lonesome straw Which lost the fire of its soul...very powerful imagtination and thoughts. thank u dear poet. tony

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