Friday, April 22, 2011

So You Had Your Mother's Eyes Comments

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So you had your mother's eyes-
I had wondered what inky abyss
you had to have fallen through,
to acquire those half-cooled coals-
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Patti Masterman
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 April 2011

Great poem with strong sentiments. Very well observed. Great imagery. The style is quite simple yet appealing and hitting the target. Excellent poetry. Thanks for sharing..... Please read my new poem if you don't mind.

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