Friday, May 9, 2008

So, Year 7, What Will You Do When You Grow Up? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Will wants to be a TV presenter,
Matthew a cricketer, Charlotte a nurse.
Nathan has his heart set on being a mechanic
- and Gareth wants to be a crayon.
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Wild Bill Balding
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Little Mo 16 January 2009

Fabulous! I very much enjoyed your year 7 class. Maybe he just wanted to colour the world a rainbow? I'd even place money on the fact he'll be a poet! ! . Mo

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Frank Cannon 28 July 2008

Gareth wants to be like your poetry. Different from the rest.

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Adele Le Keur 07 July 2008

you made poetic the dreams and ambitions of seven year olds.is that even possible? you reveal much of who you are in your poetry-bravo

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julesx 64 09 May 2008

Did he express any particular colour? ..... Good for him..... I loved this poem x Thank you for sharing x

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