Sunday, March 15, 2009

So Wrapped Up In Being Me! Comments

Rating: 4.2

There's something in the air today
though I dont know what it is
Like something's about to happen
something Magical Perhaps!
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Tracey TEE
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Fiona Davidson 23 March 2009

Brilliant write Tracy...just how Sundays should be...spending time with yourself...Fi 10+++

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Deva De Silva 18 March 2009

Beautiful write I must say... it's a treat not to be wrapped up in oneself this particular day!

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Kevin Wells 16 March 2009

Sometimes we get so wrapped up in ourselves, it comes as a shock when we surface, see others around us, hear birdsong, smell the roses. And for a small time, realise we are a very small brush stroke within a huge masterpiece. You have captured one of those instances perfectly.

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Stephen Stirk 16 March 2009

Lovely poem Tracy. To me sundays are something really special. Unfortuantely, they don't last very long. I love your imagery about the sights and sounds of Sunday. Steve

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Daryl Young 16 March 2009

I enjoyed this poem as well. It was really a feel good poem. And really any writing that makes people pull emotion is half the point of writing. Thank you very much. Rabbit

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