Friday, May 30, 2008

So Wise For One So Young (A Poem For Peace) Comments

Rating: 5.0

He saw the rainbows in the sky
He heard the songbirds sing,
He loved the changing seasons
And the joy that they did bring,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Hockey Fan 30 May 2008

OH MY GOD! This writing is so charged with emotion. Dude you're gonna make me cry. Wow! This is one of the best poems I have ever heard in my life (I seriously mean that) . This is something that you would see in a book or something. You melted all the words together to form a great, wonderful and sad story. What a masterpiece! 10+! Matt, and like what Duncan said ('A reader of a fine gentlemen's work')

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Thad Wilk 30 May 2008

Each time i think , now this poem is his greatest, you outdo your self each time WITH YOUR LATEST! ! Wonderful poem Andrew! ! ! *10plus*! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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Duncan Wyllie 30 May 2008

I don't know if I have the words for this one Andrew, but here goes... You have something deeply special and beautiful, it's not just your words but what shines so brightly through them, you are such a gifted person, Hold your head up high Andrew, you have much to smile about Love duncan X ('A reader of a fine gentlemen's work')

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