So Will You Shine Comments

holding million stars, yet wait for one

Two images of hope open the poem: sunlight and embers flaring up. Both happen automatically and without human action needed. So I'm assuming this emotional hope will have the same quality of reliable fulfillment! ! We can at least hope the hope is genuine. The brevity of this poem is part of its meaning: You've stated their case. now you have to fall silent while destiny, the good angel, a happy coincidence - one of these things - takes over and performs the necessary operations to make THE SHINING happen! !

Nicely expressed.Like it.

Your poetry shines like gentle gems glowing for us all to be illuminated in a little more beauty, a little more grace, a little more artistic grace. Bravo. :)

Beautiful write. You have cast your magic with words once again in this short, crisp poem. (10)

The creatures that a culture produces are people easily dismissed. Too common, too predictable, flashy, phony, frightened, frivolous. We want the electricity. We do not wish to settle. We want that feeling from another soul that goes beyond poetic definition. The wait becomes poetry, a beacon, an aqualung to keep us alive. To make it all worthwhile. Believing that the journey has an end..............it must.

Your pen spells such awesome beauty and imagery across the page until everyone who reads it feels the longing and yearning seeping into their hearts and souls and thoughts so will you shine in my dreams as mine where I hold stars a million of them in my arms.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - you've caught me up in this your passion and I can only pray your dreams come true and you really will hold a million stars in your arms... You weave spells with your poems, Nosheen.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

All the good stuff - rainbows and hope, sunshine and stars and love.10

'so will you shine in my dreams as mine' Let hope lead you on and eventually let hopes and dreams blossom into realities! Beautiful write, Nosheen!

I am sure that any man would be lucky to be your dream and in your arms.

Hi Nosheen, Loved reading the poem. A rainbow glows when the storm clouds go like a hope flaring from the dying embers. Great!

A true poem on hopes........This is will inspire millions to stay focused and never loose hope....10+++

Rainbow glows like life glows in dream or in reality. Light of life shines interestingly. Holding stars in arms sparks love. Nice piece of work.! ...10

Sight, light! Through you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.