Saturday, July 16, 2005

So What? ! Comments

Rating: 3.6

He woke, a bit too early
on that Saturday in May.
And could no longer fight
the smoke-filled fact of
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 16 July 2005

I may have put that in for you to find....: -)) One of my dictionaries says tantalising, the other one has both tantalising and tantalizing. I am looking for one that lists tantallising.....You are correct, of course. H

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 16 July 2005

I liked the poem, Herbert! However, I would revisit 'tantil(l) ising'. I know, I know...YOU'RE the professor! Thanks... Lawrence

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Allan James Saywell 16 July 2005

you seem to be on a surge herbert a artistic surge great work my friend very cutting poem Warm regards Allan

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