Thursday, January 18, 2018

So What The Old Man Was Caught Up Comments

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He was not caught up in any act
subversive to law and state,
or any act against the customs and traditions.
He was not caught up in attacking a place of worship
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Loke Kok Yee 19 January 2018

How nice to be so deeply in love, for sure love has nothing to do with age. Thank you sir.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 January 2018

He was not caught up for a bomb attack on a school killing pretty flowers who were learning the ethics...........................Thought provoking tale of love!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 January 2018

A lovely write! Age is just a number! ! My favorite lines: To become an ideal grownup human who were away of their homes to learn the civics…Thanks dear sir for sharing!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 January 2018

A wonderful and lovely write with a tinge of humor. The last lines of the poem came unexpectedly. They were the perfect closure. Amazing piece that creates indelible impression in the mind of a reader.10

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