Saturday, July 21, 2018

So What If We Dream Comments

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So what if I dream at the end of my journey
I shall be received by a fairy who left the bed early
and sang a welcome song for me while taking a shower.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 July 2018

YOUR poetry is a living dream all can't like you dream I just saw across the Internet an actress weighing a goldress 30 Kgs of gold the producer all his wealth must have sold dreaming of keeping her in hold and once the dress is finally unfurled the beauty will be flavored of golden flavour.. for years to come...he will remember the earthen pots of gold he will ensemble... contd

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Kostas Lagos 22 July 2018

A symphony of imagination! Thanks for sharing!

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Dream is a dream, so pleasant with fairies and lovely imagination of love and beauty. As you have rightly pointed out in the poem ' what if i dream at the end of my journey why not? As always, you poems are so full of romantic thoughts and with a power of attraction for the readers.10

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2018

Yes So what! I dream and I love I believe nothing else but knowledge comes to me through love So what! I dream I am in everything or everything in me within love So what! Excellent SIR

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Robert Murray Smith 21 July 2018

A true fairy story we should all write.++10

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 July 2018

We all are passing our lives in dreams, a few dreams come true.

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Rini Shibu 21 July 2018

Beautiful poem about dreams and fairies

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Kelly Kurt 21 July 2018

A magnificent way to describe the internal dialogue. What am I? Is my mind me? What is this? I will cease to exist, right? Enjoy the now! Seems it is all too temporary.

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