Wednesday, October 2, 2013

So What! Comments

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There is always one
One Loser
We Can't all win
No Matter
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Lyn Paul
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Kanav Justa 13 November 2013

A great message you gave.... nicee

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Amitava Sur 27 October 2013

A nice discussion with the current happenings concluding - - survival for fittest.

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Valsa George 09 October 2013

We cannot expect victory all the time! Failures and enemity from others also are sure to occur in life! Those who learn lessons from adversities and train themselves to ignore negative elements in life are sure to succeed! ! An inspiring write, Lyn! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 October 2013

Those seeing wrong Are those doing wrong Lof of times we see evil and ignore. No action taken it keeps rising. Beautiful poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 October 2013

Aha nice motivational inspirational poem ful of hope. Gud job poetess

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Unwritten Soul 05 October 2013

I am have the dark cloud...no silver lining for me.....but i having golden lining with thundering shine inside..grrrrmmmm_Soul

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Nader Baheri 05 October 2013

i like the bitter theme flows in this poem.i add nobody wins, everybody is losing.but as u ve said struggling for it is continuing.~nb

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 02 October 2013

very inspiring, Lyn, this poem reinforces the strength to survive.

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