Monday, February 12, 2018

So Unfair! Comments

Rating: 3.5

It's a sad and unfair life
So many times,
Those who deserve to be punished
Survive,
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Sandra Feldman
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2018

I absolutely agree with you sentiment expressed through this beautiful little poem, 'Those who deserve to be punished Survive'....Thanks for sharing....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 February 2018

So true. I do agree entirely with this great piece. You have precisely conveyed the reality.10

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Exactly Sandra life can be really unfair Wonderful writing Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Laquory Jones 12 February 2018

Very deep write, Thanks for sharing sandra

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The Crow 12 February 2018

Sandra, I was so sad to go. Punished by the site for being so good. Your poem has me crying with Judith who suffered too.

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