Sunday, March 16, 2008

So Tonight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Honey, I love you with all of my soul.
You're the piece that makes me whole,
but times aren't the best and this I know.
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Moth Harris
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I don't like the male character's crying in this write... I think men tend to imagine things which are NOT there and this causes the grey clouds hang above their heads neadlessly... Great write... The very last verse is my favourite :)

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