Monday, December 8, 2008

So Tired Comments

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So tired of being the stronger one
My shoulders are tired of being leaned on
My arms and legs ache from holding the world
My heart is sore from feeling everyone else’s pain,
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Nangula Immanuel 14 August 2009

Wow! I can relate to this! I love it! ! The saddest bit about being the 'strong' one is that they don't realise that you need a shoulder to lean on every once in a while too. I wrote a poem based on that 'The friendless friend'. Would appreciate a comment on it. Great poem, loved it ; -) 10

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Buck Wild 13 December 2008

i really like this poem alot and i think you are very talented.... and deep

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Jaca R 08 December 2008

oh LoSt oNe, this is sad.. and beautiful, .. simple... true... I like it.. thanks...

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