Thursday, June 15, 2023

So This Is Love Comments

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When Love came it took hold of me completely,
Like a thousand cry's of ‘YES' it just ran up to greet me.
Out of all the Hearts in all the World she had to walk into mine,
It's the Oh I don't think we're in Kansas anymore kind.
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Kevin Hulme
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Beautiful, a little poignant " I'm sunk with all Hands by the force that it has."..Nice

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Kevin Hulme 19 June 2023

Thank you. I've added some more lines to it. Are we ever finished a poem? Glad you liked it.

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