So That I Can Always Live.... Comments

A thoughtful poem that touches the heart of a reader. Powerful thoughts in a very impressive style has been painted this great poem.

Wonderful imaginative sharing you have done.....thank you :)

From beginning to end, the poem holds your attention.Imagining yourself inside a grave, that is the ultimate destination of life, comes the greatest discovery about life- 'How childish I was to think of all gold and luxury in life while the truth was same right from my birth.- - - -Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.

Nice imagery and a captivating narrative- a person having the feel of lying in a grave. Thanks. Lie here I realise one of the biggest fact of life ……

Thanks Yadav its always good to look at live in different angles. You have proved to be flexible. Nice write.

Gorgeous....deed this poem...I thing the last stanza should have 'Leaving' instead of 'living'......true..one moments stay in grave... a lesson to recount n to live...good indeed.Keep it up! ! ! !

Beautiful poem. Your each and every thought is so true and you are also very brave if actually you went to lie down in grave to have a first hand feel. But even if you didn't the dramatic opening is very impressive. Enjoyed reading the whole poem. Thank you for sharing.

love is everything in life, without love, you cannot find anything. it is the truth of this world. Thanks, I like it..

'' How childish I was to think of all gold and luxury in life, while the truth was same right from my birth…….. '' Interisting write, Mithilesh. I'll tell you, I had never thought to spend some time in a grave, just to better feel the sense of Life.. But it would help, it would really help.. :) Thanks for sharing Cheers P.S.: only 1 point, why all those dots [ ''............'' ]? no need, really.

Life and death! Living with the muse of creation. Thanks for sharing.