Saturday, November 28, 2009

So Sudden Comments

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I fell in love so sudden.
Just when i looked at you.
I knew i had to make you mine.
We talked, we laughed, we kissed.
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Karina Lopez
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I guess that's just how love is, isn't it? You did a great job expressing the suddenness, if that's a word. I like how you said it happened all of the sudden, and your poem's short. It goes so nicely.

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