Monday, December 4, 2006

So Sorry Comments

Rating: 4.5

I'm sorry for what I've done
I'm sorry for who I've been
Sorry for where its gone
So sorry to lose a friend
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Brian Dorn
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Susan Williams 09 September 2020

an excellent apology but would a woman's heart forgive?

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2019

the sorry it's the character of modesty best feelings of humanity

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Adeeb Alfateh 25 July 2019

I'm sorry I wasn't strong enough I'm sorry for not following through Sorry for dropping the ball So sorry for me and you it's beautiful poem beautiful and great 10++++++++++

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Charity Nduhiu 20 January 2015

Sorry for dropping the ball. I am so sorry you were not strong enough. So sweet

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Adeline Foster 11 April 2013

Good poem, well expressed, like it. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline

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Sarah Loves 20 July 2007

Great idea. When you don't have the humility/humbleness to apologize to that person from the heart, directly, just write a manipulative poem saying you're sorry. Magnificant idea. That way, your pride doesn't get hurt, nor your reputation for people knowing that you screwed up. Keep up the great word, Bri. 'God' bless. ~Psycho.

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Melvina Germain 13 July 2007

Very difficult words to say, but it certainly lets others know that you area man or a woman when one takes the responsibility to do so. Fantastic write Brian. --Melvina--

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Leila K 29 March 2007

This poems says so much...it takes real courage to apologise from the heart...lovely poem Brian...love Leila

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David Harris 06 March 2007

Brian, an excellent poem. Displays all the virtues that we all wish we had. It so easy to say sorry, but some of us just can't. It doesn't make everything go away, but at least it helps. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it. David

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R R 01 March 2007

Excellent Poem Brian, Not too many people are compassionate enough to say they are sorry. You at least know how to. It really takes a good person to. Take care.

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Diane Violet 15 December 2006

To recognize the wrong in something we've done and be truly sorry about it, you have displayed quite well here Brian. All the best, Diane

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Alison Cassidy 14 December 2006

Humble sentiment expressed with a pleasing structure and lack of self-consciousness. I very moving piece. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 13 December 2006

Saying we are sorry can come very easily Being sorry whilst saying it, well, that is something quite different You have displayed the latter Well done Brian for a wonderful reminder for us all Love duncan X

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Kelly Hanson 13 December 2006

first i read this as sarcastic, then as merely flippant, and felt offended. like what does he really mean? i'm not sure i ever felt that you were truly sorry though. it was nice to unravel so many meanings....

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Robert Howard 10 December 2006

The Dali Lama said, 'When you lose, don't lose the lesson.' Much richness to you.

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Sandra Fowler 09 December 2006

I cannot imagine such a sincere apology not being accepted. Very touching write, Brian. Wishing you and your friend a better tomorrow. Warm regards, Sandra

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Esther Leclerc 05 December 2006

Honest and heartfelt, an apology like this could not be refused. Nicely constructed too. Well done, Brian. Esther : ]

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R H 05 December 2006

To recognise our wrongs and then have the guts to openly admit them and apologise shows great strength of character. Sorry often is the hardest word...great poem Brian, you've delved deep into the human psyche once again...Justine.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 December 2006

Brian>>>I think you've rightly earned an 'apology accepted', from whoever... You have compassion, & wisdom to own up to any misgivings we have all been cause & victim to...Great Write, my friend...! FJR

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Tayla Conde 04 December 2006

this really made me think about my past........i really like it. Nice job.: ]

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