Tuesday, May 15, 2012

So So Sad Comments

Rating: 5.0

It caught me by surprise, this feeling I have inside.
It wells up and winds around my heart squeezing,
I feel so alone, and it hurts, I must lie down and cry.
My emotions have risen and the sad side is teasing.
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Rik Bertrand
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Hans Vr 11 June 2012

We live through our sad moments and just a bout of bad weather they seem not to last. It is only if we are afraid of sadness and try to put it away wihtout living through it that we store in places in our brain where it sits eating away our stomach lining. I like the poem. Sadness is a normal part of life and let it is so good to just let it be. I made a very short poem myself titled X..... A litle sadness

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C S 15 May 2012

I like this poem it is so sad, very emotive and well written

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Rik Bertrand

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