I used to believe in her
She used to trust in me
She loved me and care for me
But now I know all was empty lies.
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You can feel the sorrow and anger in your words and the contrast between your words when comparing the childish and acid smile is amazing.
love seems to be betrayed, that happens to happen at times by reeks of closeness knowing more each other....quite poignant ans passionate write..10+, thanks
a sad ending for a beautiful story..well expressed
OUCH! ! ! ! ! ! That hurts...lovely moving poem...Heart felt one! Thanks....I echo Alf suggestions...