Friday, June 12, 2009

So, She Dumped Me Comments

Rating: 3.2

I used to believe in her
She used to trust in me
She loved me and care for me
But now I know all was empty lies.
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NENGOVHELA MURENDENI
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Catrina Heart 14 June 2009

OUCH! ! ! ! ! ! That hurts...lovely moving poem...Heart felt one! Thanks....I echo Alf suggestions...

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Carol Gall 12 June 2009

betrayal at any age hurts good poem 10

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Vanessa Hibberd 12 June 2009

You can feel the sorrow and anger in your words and the contrast between your words when comparing the childish and acid smile is amazing.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 June 2009

love seems to be betrayed, that happens to happen at times by reeks of closeness knowing more each other....quite poignant ans passionate write..10+, thanks

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a sad ending for a beautiful story..well expressed

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well done Mr Murendi, u r a genius.

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