Saturday, June 27, 2015

So Says The Peacock Comments

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Take a look at this ornament. How does it make you feel?

See how my eyespots can gather you in from all angles. See how kaleidoscopically I enjoy the beauty of your crest from all compass points of my tail.
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Denis Mair
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Mahtab Bangalee 01 April 2019

excellent poetic expression- All my eyespots sway gently in the breeze. Imagine how we will gaze together on the perfect garden! /// love it

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Luo Zhihai 22 October 2017

Excellent poem. Great piece. Keep it up!

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Bharati Nayak 09 November 2016

See how my eyespots can gather you in from all angles. See how kaleidoscopically I enjoy the beauty of your crest from all compass points of my tail. With all these eyes I know where the best seeds are. Come and I can show you the best forage spots. All my eyespots sway gently in the breeze. Imagine how we will gaze together on the perfect garden! The refracted light from my feathers gives an appearance of liquid depth' - - - - - - I marvel at the beauty of your composition.Wow- what a view of peacock- - - -Kaleidoscopic, liquid depth- and, perfect garden.

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Rose Kanana 04 November 2016

An interesting read it is Denis, i like the thoughts of the peacock

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