So peaceful the morning
A sense of belonging,
The stillness and silence
The breaking of dawn,
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I do love the two rhyming lines they bring it all together so well. An excellent write and such a soothing poem to read. Very therapeutic. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Duncan is right...there's a lot of Enya poem turned celtic song in this piece...like Orinoco Flow.......great flow of words...nice job. Thanks
Such a time gives blessed mood to me also as you feel in the early morning! It reveals that you have written this piece with real enjoyment. That's good!
Who could not enjoy? Andrew, I see a lot of enya in your poem, I'll leave you with this one Love duncan X CHINA ROSES by enya Who can tell me if we have heaven, Who can say the way it should be; Moonlight holly, the sappho comet, Angels tears below a tree. You talk of the break of morning As you view the new aurora, Cloud in crimson, the key of heaven, One love carved in acajou. One told me of china roses, One a thousand nights and one night, Earths last picture, the end of evening: Hue of indigo and blue. A new moon leads me to Woods of dreams and I follow. A new world waits for me; My dream, my way. I know that if I have heaven There is nothing to desire. Rain and river, a world of wonder May be paradise to me. I see the sun. I see the stars.
Love the flow and the finishing lines drifted out so slowly Love duncan X