So Near, Yet So Far Comments
I’m an open and transparent soul,
She is like a black hole
I’m too eager to share my joys,
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what a wonderful comparison ' she is like a black hole'. i learnt something new. An enigmatic person can be addressed as a black hole coz it is so unknown. Your comparisons are really very good. The last stanza is fantastic. Firstly you need to climb up to her heart (describing the difficult path) and secondly it cant be possible by your efforts until she herself wants you to do so. 10+
a day will come when u will get ur reply. till then, wait....nice, trasperent way of writing
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7/20/2025 8:52:47 PM # 1.0.0
more of a confession than a poem...wow..