So Near Yet So Distant Comments

Powerful poem well done

kudos.....excellent write.

a tender write from an equally tender heart!

A very romantic poem.10++

Romantic themes in this poem by a sensitive author. However some sensual tones are oriental, just to pay a compliment more than an analysis.

the saga of sentiments, unfortunately we behold what we want, to be, hoping that passion will turn into compassion as well, the meanderings of feelings are manifold alas often fall on the rock of disappointment, the poem poignantly expressed the sensitive tender and sad,10

love is the feeling that we comprehend in evry breath evry heart beat very romantic poem from a talented and romantic poet

The yearning of a lover...the wait and the pain of loneliness...the depth of love....a very good read! well done Reshma!

Tears of joy or regret? Whichever, a fine piece of writing Reshma...

Very sensative poem of love

very beautiful, thanks for sharing 10

Full of love from the bottom of ya heart! The man is lucky to whom directed at.. remembering- 'Our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought' 10+++++++

great piece, well done Reshma.10 from Tom

Very heartfelt, completely a beautiful masterpiece. Great read.

The heart yearning for the great love missed.A ten from me.Very bittersweet.

a very beautiful composition on loneliness....thanks for sharing 10++++

Un ke ankhe thi ek somundar mein bar bar dubke dekha dam nikalte nehin. Thanks reshma for this piece.I like this type of poems.

the two poems fit well together thanks for sharing

a song on continuing love feelings...good one, Reshma...dear and far yet so near...10

Inner Beauty A painter of love am I In colors that depict you In green with yellow From the leaves of olive To the mustered In many colors you have Bathed me like the one Who is gone mad for the love In the oceans of your eyes When I looked in the depth A mirror though it was The passion of your lips In great tumults when I woke up The touch of you on my soul In visions in my vigils of the night You beauty of the temples of the great past I searched love in the celestial self Preacher am I of love O ye who argue for the beauty That I have seen with my eyes inner