Thursday, July 23, 2020

So Much Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Verse 1
Looking at your face so much beauty that
I intake sometimes I don't always have
The perfect words to say all the things
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M Asim Nehal 23 July 2020

All three verses nicely composed. 10 My favorite lines Only ridiculed when we're not compliant In deep thoughts as the days whistles

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Nice one.. beautiful poe, , clear 10 Go for both Friday,24th July 2020 never try to interfere or dare to compromise else you will surprise in the store poetry can be compassion a beauty can compel you to have possession both have certainly some relations you will feel from within with an excitation go for the both with trust and faith you will have an eternal breath without needing any proof Hasmukh Mehta

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 July 2020

Flame! ! ! Price of fame! A name to the world! ! ! ! Not to blame the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 July 2020

A well composed piece. Simply exceptional .....10+++

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