Tuesday, October 16, 2012

So Many Questions..... Comments

Rating: 3.5

How come Im alone?
How come no one likes me?
Iwish I knew the answers
I wish I knew how to fix it
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Ashok Sethi
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Guess Who 16 October 2012

\Nice poem rich of words....... well to be honest with you the meaning is good but it's not well written would've loved if you put some rhymes at least so the reader doesn't go so sleepy your poem is good but it could've been improved... - But one can always hope.... very beautiful expression loved it Keep the good work up didn't mean to be rude you're good keep it up Guess Who

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Ashok Sethi

Ashok Sethi

Jharsuguda, Orissa, India
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