So Many Mary(S) And John(S) Comments

so true Mary has her John a nice write

economized words but emotion is high by cycle of pair- the desire and his love great piece

The fluidity in the poem is very evocative... you did it perfectly well both explicitly and implicitly... in each stanza the reader is reminded of an essential element of life that keeps John and Mary on.. drink, thirsty, liquid, fluid.. and that was the first environment for life.. beautiful poem really.. One more thing it reminded me of joao e maria, words one meets on church walls in brasil