Monday, May 4, 2009

So Many In Vain, Reasonless Relationships (Song) Comments

Rating: 5.0

This was all such vanity,
Without the slightest purpose,
Without a half decent reason.
Like so many others seen today,
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Britney Hogue
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Indira Babbellapati 06 May 2009

it's always like our weakness being their strength...100% to the maturity of ur thought, young lady!

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I can see what a great song this would be. It is so carefully crafted and well rounded up in the last stanza too! 10 or top writing Karin Anderson

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James B. Earley 04 May 2009

Having said all that, I just know that you feel a lot better now! Excellent composition.

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Michael Gale 04 May 2009

Great poem Britney. Gave ya a ten! God bless us all-MJG.

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