Sunday, March 17, 2013

So Many Human Hues! Comments

Rating: 4.6

She slipped clumsily in a café
looked all around her
from the corner of her eye
felt all eyes upon her
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Gerry Legister 26 June 2016

Excellent work, and one that I throughly enjoyed, especially the line, It looked hale and hearty

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Kim Barney 07 June 2016

Very entertaining. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!

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Savita Tyagi 07 June 2016

Excellent. Very well written. Loved the theme and all the imaginative expressions. Congratulations for the member poem choice for the day.

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 07 June 2016

wow good vision. nice idea really. congrats

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Tom Billsborough 07 June 2016

Good idea for a theme. Tom Billsborough

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 June 2016

Pigmentation of humanly emotions and different hues bestowed by different emotions wonderfully portrayed. Heartiest Congrats on the Poem of the Day.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 June 2016

Pigmentation of humanly emotions and different hues bestowed by different emotions wonderfully portrayed.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

Rage! ! She watched her rivary from afar. Nice work.

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Maria Gonzalez 25 November 2015

Very imaginative. I enjoyed it. Thank you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2015

Know the pain with hatred but never be led it is all there for us to observe and simply make efforts to servet

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Bri Edwards 10 May 2013

FUNtastic. thanks for sharing. bri

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 12 April 2013

i have to say well done! This poem reminds no words to say! Brilliant!

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Shahzia Batool 06 April 2013

An allegory of colours...tabs r dipped in pallette...lovely...

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John Shea 29 March 2013

Wow! So colorful and fun. Feel sorry for the spider. You are a great port my friend.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 March 2013

Ok u can read and coment now. Its complete.

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