So Many Dreams Comments

Very naughty and encoureging. I like the expression of the last two lines. Keep on!

Great poem! Reminded me of way back when I was in school, I too would be bored and looking out the window, dreaming of so many things and watching nature play. Keep your sights set on what it is in life that you want and it will come to you as you walk towards it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Great work. Congrats. Dreams with passion can be transmuted to material things so whatever you mentioned above is possible.You do need anyone's advice to write because you are already blessed than most of the so called 'poets' here

a beautifully crafted poem...well done

This poem has such a vivacious character. The belief is inspiring too.

You have beautifully caught the feeling of optimism in this poem and allowed it to infect the reader with the same feeling. Good job.

Love it............ Really ambition is just like diluge for barren land and if efforts is rit no one hinder it

Your drams are all about flying high! That is why you have become a poet! Poets are like birds and like to fly free in theair! You are already taking of to the sky to create wonder in the world soon!

i love tat....! ! ! hope surely tat ur dreamzz com true...

nice poem....keep it up!

dreams used to be come true.whatever your dream is, one day, it will be.

Never give up on your dreams, your poem reminds me of when i was in school and later college, and the many times i looked out the window as you do, it's good to have dreams and ambitions and what brings them to fruition is you and hard work and a belief in yourself.Life is one long learning curve, enjoy it, good writing.

An inspirational and motivational poem indeed. Keep it up.

great work from a small heart...really fantastic....hope your dreams come true... »so close«

Oh great! You really have a good heart to make your dreams come true. It reminds me too, that I have much to achieve.

yar u are soo sweet, its a very nice poem :)

A very insightful poem, so well crafted full of wisdom, i loved it!

You smart young girl, you have got so many beautiful resolutions in your heart! Live upto them! May your dreams be realized one day! !

Wow! this one is very nice. You're voice can be 'heard' strongly in this poem. I like how each thought builds upon the last and how every verse begins so simply, yet becomes a profound statemen, goal, or question. Also, I love the beautiful lesson from your father. Good job! Keep refining your poetry.

Cool, you've got a bright future gurl...don't stop working on yourself